Furcadia Login Name: Gorsepaw
Preferred Warrior Name: I'd like her warrior name to come naturally through roleplay.
Desired Clan: MoorClan
Desired Ranking: Apprentice
Desired Character Age: 12 moons
Gender: Female
Reference Photo:
(Note: this should NOT be a photo of a purebred cat unless you have received prior approval from staff to play one. Artwork may accompany a photo, but may not replace it.)
Physical Description: Gorsepaw is a young short-haired she-cat with a solid gray pelt, a stubby tail, and yellow-green eyes. Her short tail makes her a little clumsier than other cats.
Furcadia Description: Gorsepaw is a young short-haired she-cat with a solid gray pelt, a stubby tail, and yellow-green eyes. Her short tail makes her a little clumsier than other cats. [MoorClan Apprentice]
Summarized Description: Solid gray she-cat with yellow-green eyes and half a tail.
History: Gorsepaw lost part of her tail in a dog attack early in her apprenticeship. She's struggled to adapt, but is slowly making progress on her changed sense of balance. Her apprenticeship will likely last longer than usual for this reason. Aside from her handicap, she is a capable and typical clan cat.
Personality: She is sweet but not naive. She's oftentimes insecure about her tail and her clumsiness. She has a fear of canines, including dogs and foxes. She's ambitious, and wants to be a great warrior.
Website (if applicable): N/A
Sample Roleplay Post(s):
Gorsepaw crouched down, her eyes focused. In front of her was a rabbit, and it hadn't noticed her yet. A good pounce would make the inevitable chase much easier. She wiggled, readied, and... pounced! She was nearly on top of it, but it pranced away from between her claws. She gave chase through the grasses, but the rabbit took a sharp turn on a steep portion of the hillside. Gorsepaw tried to correct, but her stunted tail could only give her so much help, and she stumbled and rolled down the hillside. At the bottom, she cursed under her breath, stood up, and got back to hunting.
Do you have any other characters in the dream? If so, who? None yet!
Note: I have not done much roleplay before. I'll try my best, but please forgive me if I break some rules of etiquette unknowingly. :)
GORSEPAW! GORSEPAW!
moved to accepted: moorclan!
Looks good!
Small side note, most people in the dream roleplay in the present tense ("Gorsepaw crouches down, her eyes focused. ...She gives chase through the grasses..." etc), but it's largely player preference. There are a few dream commands which rely on present tense, however, if you wish to work them into a roleplay post rather than using them separately (for example, ":pounces" for prey items).
your summarized description should is how she will show up on the clan pages. (ex: Swiftstar - long-haired grey tabby she-cat with green eyes)
once that is added you’ll be good! needs one more approval~ :3