Furcadia Login Name: Nightstorm
Preferred Warrior Name: Nightstorm
Desired Clan: Cloudclan
Desired Ranking: Warrior
Desired Character Age: 38 moons
Gender: Female
Reference Photo: Image is from Wikipedia.
Physical Description: Dark as her namesake, the cat's short, black fur make the yellow iris of her eyes stand out. Albeit not a dire color difference, the pads of her paws and whiskers are a noticeably lighter shade than the fur to a more gray hue. No drastic or feature-changing scars or wounds are to be found. While her height is at 8 inches, her weight fluctuates close to 11 pounds.
Furcadia Description: One could say she was not an emotive cat save for the scowl that was seemingly permanent. The unfriendly demeanor was apparent in the way the feline carried herself through social means: Clipped words, lack of courtesies, and purposely difficult. Any provocation was met with ferocity that of a wasp. More importantly, she was exhausted. The chronic flare-ups of her joints were maddening, and the figurative rainy days were starting to last longer. Getting out of a makeshift bed was becoming harder both mentally and physically and the desire to be social was nonexistent. This outdoor life was a rough living, and, as blasphemous as it were to sound if heard, she occasionally fantasized a comfortable indoor life.
Summarized Description: Black she-cat with yellow eyes.
History: Clan-bound, starting to develop arthritis but on the low-key side. Plans to have it worsen at she ages, making her mood worsen.
Personality:
The Good: Confident, daring, precise, organized, maternal to an extent, and realistic.
The Bad: Outspoken, sarcastic, and stubborn.
The Ugly: Aggressive, apathetic, irritable, and amoral to an extent.
Website (if applicable): N/A
Sample Roleplay Post(s):
Nightstorm reared her head up at the sudden intrusion of her space. With whiskers having flared outward coupled with the mouth having opened with a noisily intake of air- The only warning given before the tirade, she had forcibly cut herself off short when she realized that, no, what bundle of fur had stumbled straight into her was not some apprentice wanting to change out the bedding but rather bright, wide eyes staring owlishly at her. The intention was clear and a question asked unsaid. At first, her mind blanked trying to figure out why her, of all cats in this clan, was what this kitten sought, and then many things to say pooled her mind albeit very few were kitten-friendly. Eventually, all that came out of her open mouth was a wordless exhale as Nightstorm glanced to the farthest wall out of annoyance. Sure, whatever. Future of the clan and whatnot, but could the future ask her first? The cat supposed this could be an opportunity to correct this behavior, but there also was the thought that this moment was only brief since the kit was to be collected soon. The time to decide had crested at the swish of the kitten's tail, bringing her focus back onto what was now getting ready to pounce. With little reluctance Nightstorm had shifted onto her side so that she may fan out her front paws and play catch. What harm was a little training?
Do you have any other characters in the dream? If so, who? First cat/first application with the intention of retiring early, as I just want to dip my toes. I'm trying my best!
Edits:
-> Added more to the physical description.
-> Simplified the summarized description.
-> Edited Furcadia description with reworked phrases and removed "Cup of tea/Cup of kibble" idiom.
moved to accepted: cloudclan
Good overall. Please make sure you add your character's clan and rank into your Furcadia description, as noted in the template instructions:
looks great with the edits! just needs 1 more approval :3
looks great aside from a few things:
if you could expand on the physical description that would be awesome! (ex: how is she built, does she have any scars or defining physical features, does she have longer fur or shorter, etc.) a few sentences should suffice. the summarized description should be shorter as it's what will be featured on the clan page. you'd want something like "Nightstorm - black she-cat with yellow eyes" in her furcadia description you mention "this outdoor life was not her cup of kibble" clan cats don't know the term "kibble" and they often associate kittypet food with being dry and tasteless, so using the term like that doesn't really make sense, seeing as "kibble" would be considered a bad thing. just fix up those little issues and you should be good to go! ^_^ i'm stoked to welcome this moody kitty into the dream